WRITING RAMMY 2023

Our 2023 Writing Rammy saw some incredible stories, poems and art from people of all ages across the Falkirk area.  Our celebration event at Falkirk Library on Monday 13th November was hosted by local author and Writing Rammy supporter Helen MacKinven. It was a special evening where many of our authors got up and shared their work with friends and family.

Adult Fiction

Winner – For Whom the Clock Ticks by Jamie Andrew

Runner Up – The New World by Rebecca Ferguson

Adult Poetry

Winner – My Braw Big Dug by Kay Miller

Runner Up – Erica by Heather Merrick

Runner Up – Rough Castle by Andrew McAuley

Teen Fiction

Winner – Love Letters by Stephanie Cameron

Runner Up – Samantha Gordon

Teen Poetry

Winner – Chloe Lannon

Junior Fiction (8-12)

Winner – Anna Lynas

Runner Up – Striking a Friendship by Emma Clarke

Junior Fiction (8& under)

Winner – The Dragon that Saves the Day by Zainab Iqbal Sikander

Runner Up – The Boy who went to School on a Plane by Lucas Aitken

Junior Graphic Novel

Winner – The Last Brownie by Beth Callahan

Runner Up – Bella the Sea Monster and the Crisps by Kikka & Chris McKee

Under 8 Fiction Winner, Writing Rammy 2023

The Dragon Saves The Day by Zainab Iqbal Sikander

Once upon a time there was a big dragon. I mean very, very, very big. It had razor sharp teeth. He had big eyes and he breathed fire. Everyone said he was cute except when he smiled and that was a problem. He wanted to go to dragon school.

This is Eric’s list for being scary.

Eric’s List

  1. Go to the hair cutter
  2. Make my wings scary
  3. Take fire classes

When he had done all the things he felt strange. He felt like the world was in trouble. He felt like he was the only one to save the world but where do I have to go. Then he saw dragons flying the opposite direction of the dragon school and then he saw more dragons and finally the last dragon came. Eric said ‘What is going on?’ The dragon said there is a fire breathing dragon attacking our school! Eric said ‘Don’t worry I am going to save your school’ and then he few off.

When he arrived at the dragon school he saw fires everywhere and then he saw the fire breathing dragon. Then the fire breathing dragon said ‘Well, well, well, look who came!’ Eric said ‘I challenge you to a fire breathing contest. If you win you get to keep the school.’

They fought for three hours and it was the last round and then Eric won the contest. He was so happy that the dragon school was rebuilt. Then he lived happily ever after.

The end.

Teen Fiction Runner Up, Writing Rammy 2023

By Samantha Gordon

They both clamped their shaking hands over their mouths and stomach as nausea built up a wave of blurred vision and dizziness with every surge of the ground. Suddenly the decision to sneak into the hull of an enemy ship as it departed to report the destruction of everything they stood for, seemed like a laughably bad idea. They weren’t exactly ready for the unforgivable and lurching nature of ocean travel; the closest thing being paddling lightly through oases and shallow rivers as relief from the scorching heat. A loud battering and strong smell of decay made Olivia jump to attention searching for the source through dazed and frantic eyes. Just as she found the spot water exploded into the hull, weighing the floor into a slant and throwing Noah tumbling onto his feet and Olivia scrambling to keep her balance.

In front of them a figure stepped out from the crack in the wood, it was hunched and unsteady dripping water into the flooding deck. The creature could hardly be considered human, pale blue skin clung tightly to sharp sleek bones, tearing at the ribs revealing stained bones dripping with stringy black blood that failed to hide a completely hollow chest. The creature had no heart, only a pale ragged blue crystal suspended in strings of inky blood. Transparent fins were twitching at every joint, a group of them were clustered on its head, like layered hair, concealing its eyes with only sharp ears and a gross toothy grin that split its face visible. Its thin claw-like hand twisted backwards slamming its hand into the water, the water obeyed smoothly leaving the deck dry and filtering back out the ship in one smooth motion. Olivia and Noah’s breath caught in their throat, desperation and fear in the air. It stood straight re-adjusting the fabric tied round its waist and snapped its head up, two deep and hollow black eyes stared at them, the faint shine reflected in them its only pupils as its grin widened impossibly further.

Noah fell back with a thump that caught the corpse-like figures’ attention and it began to lumber forward, growing more confident in its stride with each step it took. Even with its eagerness it seemed to struggle, its body looking as if it was being dragged harshly and its breaths were strained and raspy forcing its hollow chest into jerked heavy heaves and wet pants from its jaw. Noah sat wide eyed and frozen in place. Olivia grabbed at the ground blindly before picking up a cracked and rusty telescope, she gulped, she wasn’t exactly confident in this as her weapon of choice. Instead she smashed it against the ground, the weak metal shattering as the mechanisms flew apart. The creature stopped abruptly licking its lips and turning away from Noah and scanned the area where the noise could have come from and turned to her grinning. Olivia matched the grin with a smirk filled with satisfaction and pride, her confidence returning.

Age 8-11 Fiction Winner, Writing Rammy 2023

By Anna Lynas

Always remember that you are absolutely unique. Just like everyone else.’
Margaret Mead


It feels like your tummy is in knots. Everything’s wrong. Your head is racing and can’t stop. If you add shyness into being scared, you end up with someone whose voice is empty and can’t find a friend.


‘Ding-dong!’ rang the bell at BerryWood School. Chitter-chatter filled the corridor, as woodland animals made their way to class. All except me. I had to ask a teacher where my classroom was, but I struggled to find the words. I’m not good at talking to strangers.


When I walked to my desk I could feel a million eyes upon me. I knew they were judging my prickles, probably thinking they looked scary and threatening. All I could do was curl into my ball of prickles and shrink into my seat.


I really wish I hadn’t had to move school, but I didn’t have a choice. I had to move because of these horrible creatures called humans. They had used chainsaws louder than thunder to chop down the homes of my squirrel friends. I have never seen them since.


It’s hard moving to a new place and trying to get new friends, especially if you have prickly spikes like me. Everyone was scared of me. Everyone thought I would hurt them. Everyone, that is, except a small caterpillar called Jack.


He had tiny hairs poking out of his little brown body that looked like spikes, but were as fuzzy as a cat’s fur. When he moved, his body shimmied up and down all in one motion. It was completely unique. But I noticed that other animals sneered and sniggered.


It turned out that Jack also felt like he didn’t fit in. Just like me, he was scared and shy, but I just didn’t know at first.


That’s why when Jack tried to talk to me on my first day, I now realise he must’ve been really brave to use his voice. But, at that moment, I just couldn’t respond. My own mouth was empty of words.


It wasn’t until the next day I realised what Jack had done and what having a friend truly meant. When he tried again to talk to me, his words changed it all. “Your prickles look amazing”, Jack said. I gasped. My prickles? Me? “They do?” I questioned in shock; Jack nodded. That meant everything. No one had ever complimented me on them before. Maybe my prickles weren’t so scary after all. Maybe they just made me unique.


The most amazing part of being Jack’s friend was seeing his transformation. When Jack came out of his cocoon he became a Northern Brown Argus. In fact, he became the rarest butterfly in Scotland. But to me, he was always the most beautiful creature I’d ever seen. To me, he was my unique friend, Jack.

And his best friend was prickly, little, unique me, because I’m a hedgehog as friendly as can be.