Adult Poetry Winner, Writing Rammy 2023

Ma Braw Big Dug by Kay Miller

A big broon dug wi a broken leg
I loved ye at first glance, You’d maybe take a while to heal
But I hud te take the chance.

Fu’ o life and energy
Ye jumped right o’er the couch, Then ate us oot o hoose an hame
’Til yer belly grew a pouch.

Guid times we hud o’er many years
Yer wee broon face turnt grey, They eyes still glistened wi mischief
Tho much ye couldnae dae.

Ma braw big dug, ma best boy
Saying cheerio wis hard, Ma heart is broke, ma throat is tight, Ma very soul is jarred.

Am even greetin in ma dreams
Whaur I see yer face aglow, “Am fine noo mam,” I hear ye say, “It’s time te let me go.

I wake up clingin on te ye
E’en tho we’re far apart, I’ll never let ye go ma boy
Yer always in ma heart

Writing Rammy winners 2021

We’re thrilled to unveil the winning entries in this year’s writing challenge.

2021 was truly a bumper year for entries. We were blown away by the quality and depth of the stories and poems submitted and we could have given out many more prizes!

Huge thanks to everyone who took part. We hope that, even if you weren’t successful, you’ll join us again for our 5th year in 2022.

Now, get comfy, and settle down to read. You might need a hanky for a couple of these!

Adult Fiction

Winner Rebecca Ferguson: We Were Dancing

Runner-up Pauline Evans: Belief

Adult Poetry

Winner Maggie Barrowman: For Angie

Written by Maggie for her sister.

Runner-up Nikki Kemp: Bonnie Wee Scotland

Nikki works within addiction services in Falkirk to raise awareness, reduce stigma, challenge and tackle inequalities, and make change.

Teen

Winner James Shearer, age 15: Broken Dreams

Junior Fiction (9-12)

Winner Aesha Marie Heron, age 12: A Deep, Dark Worry

Runner-up Millie Clark, age 11 Evacuation

Runner-up Eden Foltier, age 9: Aboot a Weed

Junior Fiction (8 and under)

Winner Grace Kidd, age 7: Charlie the Little Robot

Runner-up Hannah Guthrie, age 7: The Runaway Marble

Family Rammy

We award the Family Rammy prize to the family who sends in entries together. There was some stiff competition this year, but previous winners The Pollocks triumphed again!

Mum Taslin: Motherhood

Aaron, age 12: The Beaches

Aysha, age 10: My Scar

A Deep, Dark Worry by Aesha Marie Heron, age 12

Junior (9-12) Winner, Writing Rammy 2021

It’s thrashing about

Punching and kicking

Guilt swells up inside

Sickening screams dwell louder and louder

It follows me around

Like a shadow

And spies on me

Like a slithering snake

Restless it is

Restless as hell

Not stopping

No distractions, not one

It keeps me up all night

I’m tossing and turning

Infiltrating my mind

Like a virus

My stomach lurches

And my heart races

Tingling feelings

And collywobbles

It’s growing bigger and stronger

Its claws bite my lips

Power, like no other

Its mind poisons another

I drag it around with me

Hauling and heaving

Mind straining with the burden

Bricks piling upon my back

When will it go?

When will it leave?

Why is it here?

Help me…. help me

I cannot describe it

Too wicked

But I guess you’ve had it…

A deep, dark worry

For Angie by Maggie Barrowman

Winner, Adult Poetry, Writing Rammy 2021

The night before you died, I was lying in my bed breathing

In and……….. out

thinking of you and feeling you breathing with me

willing you to hold on

like I heard you breathing in the big bed in Garthamlock, both of us huddled from the cold,

Ice on the windows, both swaddled in the big, checked overcoats placed on the bed to keep us warm

I heard you breathing as you were struggling to carry boxes of clothes into our new flat

Short of breath as we danced at parties twirling around laughing at life

I felt you breathing as I zipped up your dress on your wedding day watching you smile in the mirror

I was more worried that my long-zipped dress would burst in the chapel

I heard you breathing in your hospital bed holding your beautiful son; your beautiful smile mirrored in his face

You said you were gasping for a fag and we all laughed, your joy was infectious.

I heard you breathing in Amsterdam our wild weekend away

Going up and down the lift because the hotel was non smoking

I heard you breathing as you cuddled me so hard when My husband died

You came straight over when you heard the news

We sat and drank old brandy from a Spanish tourist bottle

You got drunk with me and I felt safe.

I heard you breathing in the nursing home sleeping on your chair as we arrived

You woke to see us with your beautiful smile and your hands open in welcome

The love for you in there was clear to see, a small gesture here a gentle hug there

Even so we were always sad to leave you there, our big sister

Though you are gone I can still feel you breathing with me

And as long as I breathe you are there breathing from a special place in my heart

My Angie space.